Post by EBON on Jan 27, 2012 19:49:51 GMT -8
Name: Coldheart (Avenger)
Species: Cat
Age: 30 Moons
Gender: Male
Clan: None
Rank: Loner
Eye color: Cold silver-blue
Looks/ description: Coldheart is grey tabby tom. Becuase hes from the clan of Sunclan, he is a large, strong and bulky cat. Hes not just brawn however, hes a clever one as well. His eyes are an amazing silver-blue color. Coldhearts ears have too many chips in it too count. He has a very short tail, a dog bit most of it off.
Personality: Coldheat is a stubborn, spiteful and hateful tom. (He has a short temper and explodes on cats for making even the smallest of mistakes. Everything must be perfect.) He views almost everyone as being lower then himself. Coldheart wont take orders from anyone. He must be in charge, or will not be part of a group at all. He believes everyone should bow down to him, if they don't trouble is on its way. He has a reputation in the loner world as holding onto even the smallest of grudges. He always finds a way to get the cats back, most of the time through payment of blood and life. His loner name is "Avenger".
Theme song(optional): "Night of the Hunter" - 30 Seconds to Mars
Other information(optional): He was exiled from Sunclan by Leapstar.
History:
Coldkit watched as Leapkit played with her mothers tail. Her brother had been a still born. The other queens in the nursery whispered that Leapkits mother had broken Starclan's rule. She had been mates with a Breezeclan cat. Leapkit was a half blood.
His cold blue eyes narrowed at the tuxedo patterned kitten. She was an abomination, and he would make sure she was treated like one. Coldkits sister, Gingerkit began to walk awkwardly over to Leapkit that signature goofy smile on her face. Coldkit puffed up his grey tabby fur and lept at his sister, knocking her to the ground. "Don't you talk to that kit, do you hear me Gingerkit?" He growled "Shes bad, a curse." Gingerkits eyes widened "No shes not!" She squeaked, then tried to cover her head with her paws. Fearing one of Coldkits large paws swatting at her head. "Unless you want to find thorns in ur nest, follow what I say!" He removed hsi paws and stomped back to their mother. Gingerkits shivered, his words were not empty threats. She looked back at Leapkit sorrowfully.
Coldpaw watched Bramblefang talk with Gingerpaws mentor, Branchsnap. The warrior she-cat smiled happily as she began to chat about Gingerpaw. "Yes! I think she might just turn out to be one of the best warriors in Sunclan one day. She learns very quickly." Coldpaw turned his silver-blue eyes onto his red colored sister. No one's better then me! He bristled at the pure thought of such an idea. "Yah," Branchsnap continued "I think I might test her a bit later." Bramblefang grinned "Oh? I might do that with Coldpaw! He might be able to improve with a little challenge." Branchsnap finished the last bit of her mole then stood up. "Great! Me and Gingerpaw will meet you two out in the forest after your finished eating."
The two warriors watched their apprentices disappear into the ferns. Branchsnap shyly looked at Bramblefang. "While their out taking the test, how about we go and see how much we can get?" Bramblefang blinked at the brown she-cat. "But shouldn't we be watching them?" She flicked his nose with her thick-furred tail. "It's leaf-bare, we should do as much as we can. anyhow, how much they bring back will tell us how good they do." Brambleclaw nodded and followed the she-cat the other direction.
Gingerpaw stalked a mouse by the river. She would win, Coldpaw would finally lose at something! He may have been able to pick on her as a kitten, but she would surpass him as a warrior. She snapped her head back at the sound of paw steps. Her tabby grey-furred brother stepped out from the brambles. "Coldpaw? what are you doing here?" Gingerpaw meowed "You should be out hunting prey, we're testing remember?" Coldpaw steped closer, his long fur matted with leaves and dirt. "Did you roll in fox dung? You stink brother!" the young she-cat complained. "They say your better then me..." Coldpaw growled narrowing his eyes. Gingerpaw returned the glare "So?" She challenged, her bulky brother towering over here now. "No one... No one, will ever be better then me!" He hissed sending the red apprentice spluttering into the river. Her bright green eyes filled with terror, water rushed into her nose, ears and mouth. She tried to grab for Coldpaw, but she couldn't so much as get at a hair...
"Its Gingerpaw! Please help! My sister!" Coldpaw yowled rushing into camp, his pelt soaked. His sisters body drapped over his back. All the clan rushed from their dens to see what was going on. "What happened to Gingerpaw Coldpaw?" Berrystar asked as the grey apprentince laid her body onto the ground. "I-I don't know, I just saw her body floating down the river while I was hunting!" He lied, bowing his head over his murdered sister. "Gingerpaw!" Branchsnap screamed, dropping her kill onto the ground in shock...
Leapwing couldn't be deputy, she just couldn't be! "Berrystar is foolish and old! A half-blood can't be leader of Sunclan!" Coldheart yowled, running for the grizzled old leader of Sunclan. "Your mousebrained Berrystar!" Coldheart hissed. "No Coldheart, my brain is clear, it is your eyes that are clouded." Berrystar meowed. Before Coldheart could even think about what he was doing, he jumped at Berrystar, knocking them both off the rock. They crashed to the ground, Berrystars neck snapped on impact. His last life lost. Coldheart rose from on top if Berrystar, and looked around, expecting eyes of approval. Instead the clan surrounded him with eyes of anger and blood lust. He bristled, how dare they treat him like this! He spun around to see Leapwing looking down at him from highrock. Her cold yellow eyes bore into him, and for once he felt true fear.
"Coldheart, you have always been a hateful cat." Leapwing hissed. "But today, you let your anger take control of your actions. For murdering Berrystar, your punishment should be death. Instead, I will let you live with your life. You are banished!" Coldheart bristled at the she-cat above him. "I belong here! It is you who should leave half-blood!" Branchsnap, an elder now, limped out of her log. "Do you really think you belong here Coldheart? After murdering your sister, and Berrystar? You don't belong here, a creature like you dosen't even belong on the planet." His grey fur rose at the mention of Gingerpaw. "Why do you think I killed my sister?!" Branchsnap blinked at him "Everyone else may have believed your lies Coldheart, but I could see through them." The clan yowled at the news. "He deserves to die!" Yellowblood hissed swiping at the tom with his lcaws. "No!" Leapstar yowled, "He will live with what he has done! Swallowear, Stoneclaw, get this murderer out of our territory!" His two old clanmates charged at him. Coldheart spun around and ran as fast as he could out of the camp...
He ran as fast as his legs could send him. Sunclan, his clan, the one hes been in since he was born... They had exiled him, thrown him out. No, it wasn't them, and it wasn't even him! It was Leapstar, she had done this...!
Water dripped off the roof onto the shivering grey cat. His grey-blue eyes shot from corner to corner of the street. Dogs barked, and other cats could be sensed lurking in the shadows. Leapstar had done this to him! She was trouble ever since she was born! He would get her back for this, she had taken everything from him. He would take everything from her... Eventually. He just needed power, much more power...
Species: Cat
Age: 30 Moons
Gender: Male
Clan: None
Rank: Loner
Eye color: Cold silver-blue
Looks/ description: Coldheart is grey tabby tom. Becuase hes from the clan of Sunclan, he is a large, strong and bulky cat. Hes not just brawn however, hes a clever one as well. His eyes are an amazing silver-blue color. Coldhearts ears have too many chips in it too count. He has a very short tail, a dog bit most of it off.
Personality: Coldheat is a stubborn, spiteful and hateful tom. (He has a short temper and explodes on cats for making even the smallest of mistakes. Everything must be perfect.) He views almost everyone as being lower then himself. Coldheart wont take orders from anyone. He must be in charge, or will not be part of a group at all. He believes everyone should bow down to him, if they don't trouble is on its way. He has a reputation in the loner world as holding onto even the smallest of grudges. He always finds a way to get the cats back, most of the time through payment of blood and life. His loner name is "Avenger".
Theme song(optional): "Night of the Hunter" - 30 Seconds to Mars
Other information(optional): He was exiled from Sunclan by Leapstar.
History:
Coldkit watched as Leapkit played with her mothers tail. Her brother had been a still born. The other queens in the nursery whispered that Leapkits mother had broken Starclan's rule. She had been mates with a Breezeclan cat. Leapkit was a half blood.
His cold blue eyes narrowed at the tuxedo patterned kitten. She was an abomination, and he would make sure she was treated like one. Coldkits sister, Gingerkit began to walk awkwardly over to Leapkit that signature goofy smile on her face. Coldkit puffed up his grey tabby fur and lept at his sister, knocking her to the ground. "Don't you talk to that kit, do you hear me Gingerkit?" He growled "Shes bad, a curse." Gingerkits eyes widened "No shes not!" She squeaked, then tried to cover her head with her paws. Fearing one of Coldkits large paws swatting at her head. "Unless you want to find thorns in ur nest, follow what I say!" He removed hsi paws and stomped back to their mother. Gingerkits shivered, his words were not empty threats. She looked back at Leapkit sorrowfully.
Coldpaw watched Bramblefang talk with Gingerpaws mentor, Branchsnap. The warrior she-cat smiled happily as she began to chat about Gingerpaw. "Yes! I think she might just turn out to be one of the best warriors in Sunclan one day. She learns very quickly." Coldpaw turned his silver-blue eyes onto his red colored sister. No one's better then me! He bristled at the pure thought of such an idea. "Yah," Branchsnap continued "I think I might test her a bit later." Bramblefang grinned "Oh? I might do that with Coldpaw! He might be able to improve with a little challenge." Branchsnap finished the last bit of her mole then stood up. "Great! Me and Gingerpaw will meet you two out in the forest after your finished eating."
The two warriors watched their apprentices disappear into the ferns. Branchsnap shyly looked at Bramblefang. "While their out taking the test, how about we go and see how much we can get?" Bramblefang blinked at the brown she-cat. "But shouldn't we be watching them?" She flicked his nose with her thick-furred tail. "It's leaf-bare, we should do as much as we can. anyhow, how much they bring back will tell us how good they do." Brambleclaw nodded and followed the she-cat the other direction.
Gingerpaw stalked a mouse by the river. She would win, Coldpaw would finally lose at something! He may have been able to pick on her as a kitten, but she would surpass him as a warrior. She snapped her head back at the sound of paw steps. Her tabby grey-furred brother stepped out from the brambles. "Coldpaw? what are you doing here?" Gingerpaw meowed "You should be out hunting prey, we're testing remember?" Coldpaw steped closer, his long fur matted with leaves and dirt. "Did you roll in fox dung? You stink brother!" the young she-cat complained. "They say your better then me..." Coldpaw growled narrowing his eyes. Gingerpaw returned the glare "So?" She challenged, her bulky brother towering over here now. "No one... No one, will ever be better then me!" He hissed sending the red apprentice spluttering into the river. Her bright green eyes filled with terror, water rushed into her nose, ears and mouth. She tried to grab for Coldpaw, but she couldn't so much as get at a hair...
"Its Gingerpaw! Please help! My sister!" Coldpaw yowled rushing into camp, his pelt soaked. His sisters body drapped over his back. All the clan rushed from their dens to see what was going on. "What happened to Gingerpaw Coldpaw?" Berrystar asked as the grey apprentince laid her body onto the ground. "I-I don't know, I just saw her body floating down the river while I was hunting!" He lied, bowing his head over his murdered sister. "Gingerpaw!" Branchsnap screamed, dropping her kill onto the ground in shock...
Leapwing couldn't be deputy, she just couldn't be! "Berrystar is foolish and old! A half-blood can't be leader of Sunclan!" Coldheart yowled, running for the grizzled old leader of Sunclan. "Your mousebrained Berrystar!" Coldheart hissed. "No Coldheart, my brain is clear, it is your eyes that are clouded." Berrystar meowed. Before Coldheart could even think about what he was doing, he jumped at Berrystar, knocking them both off the rock. They crashed to the ground, Berrystars neck snapped on impact. His last life lost. Coldheart rose from on top if Berrystar, and looked around, expecting eyes of approval. Instead the clan surrounded him with eyes of anger and blood lust. He bristled, how dare they treat him like this! He spun around to see Leapwing looking down at him from highrock. Her cold yellow eyes bore into him, and for once he felt true fear.
"Coldheart, you have always been a hateful cat." Leapwing hissed. "But today, you let your anger take control of your actions. For murdering Berrystar, your punishment should be death. Instead, I will let you live with your life. You are banished!" Coldheart bristled at the she-cat above him. "I belong here! It is you who should leave half-blood!" Branchsnap, an elder now, limped out of her log. "Do you really think you belong here Coldheart? After murdering your sister, and Berrystar? You don't belong here, a creature like you dosen't even belong on the planet." His grey fur rose at the mention of Gingerpaw. "Why do you think I killed my sister?!" Branchsnap blinked at him "Everyone else may have believed your lies Coldheart, but I could see through them." The clan yowled at the news. "He deserves to die!" Yellowblood hissed swiping at the tom with his lcaws. "No!" Leapstar yowled, "He will live with what he has done! Swallowear, Stoneclaw, get this murderer out of our territory!" His two old clanmates charged at him. Coldheart spun around and ran as fast as he could out of the camp...
He ran as fast as his legs could send him. Sunclan, his clan, the one hes been in since he was born... They had exiled him, thrown him out. No, it wasn't them, and it wasn't even him! It was Leapstar, she had done this...!
Water dripped off the roof onto the shivering grey cat. His grey-blue eyes shot from corner to corner of the street. Dogs barked, and other cats could be sensed lurking in the shadows. Leapstar had done this to him! She was trouble ever since she was born! He would get her back for this, she had taken everything from him. He would take everything from her... Eventually. He just needed power, much more power...